Illustration Friday - DUSTY !

A dusty dream

here is the image i have created for this weeks topic on www.illustrationfriday.com which is DUSTY.
this image is a photograph of my old guitar that i haven't played for a good 2-3 years now, it reminded how determined i used to be to excel in my musical skills and how much i wanted to be in a band and live life on the road.
i have not edited this image at all from how it was taken and i have applied no filters, i simply added a statement to the image to enforce the meaning and changed some of the perspectives of this text to fit around the dials and switches on the guitar.

Group Crit comments :

• look at placement of type and consider a different approach with the type.
• make text easier to read